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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2002-12-26 06:56 PM





i tried to follow the wind today,
but lost it passing by,
the come and go clouds, on pathless paths,
watched thru this searching eye,

the gulls enroute to nowhereland,
fade out beside their flight,
erased along the peekaboo sky,
apparitions now of white,

and as i wonder endlessly,
entangled in how and why,
the ocean slips away from me,
flowing simply in sync with the sky

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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2002-12-26 07:28 PM


Reminded me...
"As above, so below". Nice Write. ThisDiamond

Aenimal
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2 posted 2002-12-26 09:03 PM


Utterly beautiful M..

Raf

Magnus
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3 posted 2002-12-26 09:19 PM


I think we all have a day where it seems
we are going 30 and everything else is
doing at least 65...or more!!!!

Nicely written....expressed well..

passing shadows
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4 posted 2002-12-27 01:44 AM


beautiful scheme and theme
christian
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5 posted 2002-12-27 04:43 AM



simply gratifying.

yum.

serenity blaze
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6 posted 2002-12-27 07:54 AM


simply smiling.
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2002-12-27 08:11 AM


inkedgoddess
It's time to wake up, enjoyed.

garysgirl
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8 posted 2002-12-27 10:45 AM


I enjoyed reading this, too. It felt dreamy, like.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2002-12-28 01:07 AM


Like this...silky...James
bklynboy
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10 posted 2002-12-28 09:14 PM


A nice read...reminds me when I live 2 blocks from the ocean....I can smell the sea air and hear sounds of the seagulls. The ice cream calling out and the knish guy walking on the beach....memories....
bsquirrel
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11 posted 2002-12-30 07:59 PM


Findin' yr feet
and walkin' away.

Janet Marie
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12 posted 2002-12-30 08:07 PM


"simply" beautiful....wistful and wonderful.
from one who waited 44 years to see the ocean..this took me back there for a moment...thanks for that...think I'll keep this one.


Will the wind remember the names it has blown in the past?
With this crutch, its old age and wisdom, it whispers no ... this will be the last.

jh

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