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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-12-26 01:59 PM



Rich Liquid Eyes

pour out a little
something warm
when the lights
go down
thick, rich
and syrupy
not the blue stuff
make it brown
that special fluid
that does not run
but holds to
your skin in cling
melting the cold
and within
releasing pleasures with
the warmth it brings


“life is not about breathing moments, it is about moments that leave you breathless.” author unknown

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Thomas119gold
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1 posted 2002-12-26 02:13 PM



Magnus
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2 posted 2002-12-26 02:45 PM


Helen,  you have a definitely distinctive
way of painting a portrait...nicely done..

Sunnyone
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3 posted 2002-12-26 04:03 PM


Aw, girl, you are an artist and paint your works from the colours of your heart!! I just love reading your posts here, and this one is warm, perfect for a chilly winter night!!  ~~S~~

Pen how you truly feel...
it is a safety-valve for the soul!
    

[This message has been edited by Sunnyone (12-26-2002 04:03 PM).]

passing shadows
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4 posted 2002-12-27 01:56 AM


just like molasses
christian
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5 posted 2002-12-27 04:35 AM



:melting:

, marry me?


CocoBaci
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6 posted 2003-01-12 12:12 PM


A very sweeeeeet read PoetFriend...
HugsNsmiles2u
*~coco~

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