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0 posted 2002-12-26 01:50 PM


Passage 36
A baby face that bit
As her disguised rampage walked
Unburdened by this sense
Accustomed to fixed emotions
With every verb past tense.
A dreamer that stayed silent
A wanderer that searched for glory
Through the ruffled sheets
Laid their whole life story.
She danced steps with a twinkle toe
And barked atrocities
He weighted her innate sense
That indulged in delightful animosities.
They kept finding each other
Meetings said to be the last
What was there to expect
When the present forgot the past.

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1 posted 2002-12-26 02:50 PM


Nicely done,  descriptive,  articulate...
pleasure meeting ya..

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2 posted 2002-12-28 02:32 AM


I bloody like this...more???

K

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