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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Come Come walk with me a fantasy Upon a ship of argosy And there we’ll ride the shadow waive A phantom ship that holds the brave A trip of non-reality With pleasures of totality A cruise within the sea of ID The lifting of Pandora’s lid There is no credit card to use And nothing there for you to lose Perhaps a windmill in a joust A pleasant thought that you could roust. It is a place of shadowed walls A pleasant place of songbird calls A place that lives within your soul An ever-present living shoal So why not while a lullaby And dream you are a butterfly. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
If I butter-fly onto your petal would it then turn in to silvered metal? Would you joust with me in my swift flight? or simply wave the air, a magical Knight? Would you lend to me your fantasy teas as for summer days, roll back reality... Smiling here. Happy Holidays, Sy! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, All of the above.   |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i do love nonreality, but i find i slip into it too often , at times, and no a credit card wont get you there, thankfully there are some places only the imagination could visit |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess Point well taken, happy holiday. |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
Sy, Another of your flight of fancies.... so positive and uplifting. I love it! Happy Day, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy I'll go with you to land of Oz a butterfly in minutes pause  Merry Christmas! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Pat, And a happy Holiday to you and yours. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Be delighted to have you. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
  Merry Christmas Stinky bring Randy and meet me under the mistletoe *L* *winkiewinkie*  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You bet, here I come on Randys back. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) This is soooooooo beautifully graceful, sweet friend, I wish you and your whole family the most merriest Christmas and for your hearts to all feel light like butterflies gossamer wings! (big hugggssssss) Happy Holidays, dearest friend! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Noah, Thank you my friend. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
And the band plays on within the mind of fantasies... Nicely done Sir Sy.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Barry. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
"A cruise within the sea of ID The lifting of Pandora’s lid" What a great line, and I'm quite sure it would do just that! Dream on, young man This was a pleasure to read Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Thank you my dear and may you have the brightes of a New Year. Love Sy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
why not...yes...why not. |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
i like this, and respect the quality of your work. |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
"So why not while a lullaby And dream you are a butterfly." beautiful! believe I will!!--enjoyed! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you passing shadows. christian Thank you for the nice comment. Sandpiper Thank you and why not. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, my mind's eye always likes to "see" your beautiful poetry...... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
garysgirl And I always like to see your beautiful reply. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sy~ I just LOVE your poetry. I really enjoyed your choice of words in this piece. The fantasy became reality as I read. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
lovely visions dancing and fluttering around in my head. Nice write! ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Vicky, Thank you so much for the read and wonderful comment. Salty, Appreciate your read and nice reply. |
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