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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2002-12-24 07:34 PM




brown eyes meeting blue,
in this evenings christmas moon,
all our distance fades.........

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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2002-12-24 07:56 PM


Very well said. Nice Write. ThisDiamond
garysgirl
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2 posted 2002-12-24 10:11 PM


I like these short ones. A lot said in a few words.  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-12-24 11:21 PM


LOVELY THOUGHTS...james
Aenimal
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4 posted 2002-12-25 02:07 AM


Countless emotions in 3 little lines..
passing shadows
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5 posted 2002-12-25 04:39 AM


just beautiful!
bklynboy
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6 posted 2002-12-25 10:05 PM


blue eyes shining bright,
looking hopefully to a new year,
a new beginning,
a renewal,
old friends becoming new lovers,
brown eyes gazing into a new distance,
finding a gentle touch,
a shoulder who helps bear the burden,
a light when only darkness abound

inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2002-12-25 10:14 PM


just lovely,brklyn - you got it.
i could use some fla. sun right now, its snowing in NJ

Sunshine
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8 posted 2002-12-25 10:31 PM



A beautiful poem...
I hope you bring it back to us
next year
and tell us how it transpired...


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