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ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

0 posted 2002-12-24 07:30 PM

You tell me you care for me
what do I do, I care too
You ask me to listen to you
I imagine I'll hear the truth
You ask do you love me too?
I always say I do

Then you leave me waiting
for the benefits of loving you
I find myself hating
the stand up routine you use.

I'll be home at seven dear
we'll have a good evening
I'll make your favorite dish
I'll be yours for the keeping
all through the mellow night
that won't be me sleeping

Then you leave me waiting
for the benefits of loving you.
I find myself hating
the stand up routine you use.

I let you know just what I mean
and I'll always be there for you
But you got a stand up routine
and you stand me up the fool

If you said goodbye to me today
There'd still be a part of me to wait

And I'd be there waiting
for the benefits of loving you
I find myself hating
the stand up routine you use.

Tell me what should I do
I'm so inspired by you
while I find myself hating
that stand up routine you use.

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

1 posted 2002-12-24 07:53 PM

Arg this sounds familiar... beautifully expressed, and thanks for the read

I'm dangerous when left alone hehehe

*sniff* I've never been abducted by aliens...

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2002-12-24 08:33 PM

Then you leave me waiting
for the benefits of loving you.
I find myself hating
the stand up routine you use.
well now you really are entering my mind...
I have a routine, but I wouldn't call
it a stand up one

M

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-12-24 09:27 PM

This is really written so beautifully, but so sad........

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2002-12-25 04:48 AM

love/hate relationships...I got one.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2002-12-25 06:07 PM

(big hugggssssssss) Oh Eric, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I hope this routine doesn't go on and on recently now and now love suprises you with such warmth and tenderness all the time! (sigh) We all wish you and your family the most merriest Christmas, God Bless You, yay!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2002-12-26 06:52 AM

this realtionship sounds so uninspiring, and youve presented it well

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

7 posted 2002-12-26 08:12 AM

the unbalanced scales of "give and take"--well done!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2002-12-26 10:38 AM

Love comedians are not very funny.

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