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Open Poetry #24

Listen To The Goose Steps

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2002-12-24 02:01 AM

Listen to the goose steps.....

the march of time
     in goose step rhyme
           hup two three four
                war war war war

twisted minds
     like lemon rinds
           take bitter pill
                and kill kill kill

the pain is real
      the bullets feel
           the rip and tear
                 what do you care?

keep the rhythm
      stroke the gun
            wave your flag
                  at everyone

the march of time
        in goose step rhyme
             feeds war machine
                  and pockets dime

and they all went marching
down
to the woods
to get out
of the rain
BOOM BOOM BOOM

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2002-12-24 02:15 AM

Excellent Kacy, the layout of the poem really drives it home.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2002-12-24 02:25 AM

Thanks for marching to a different tune.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2002-12-24 02:54 AM

yeah, sad...good theme, and nice layout.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

4 posted 2002-12-24 02:55 AM

The visual is excellent.

The message SHOULD be apparent.

Hugs Kacy.

I'm with you all the way on this'n.

Happy holidays...and PEACE.

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