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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought 
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(this was kind of a spur of the moment write which doesn't necessarily reflect my exact thoughts.. but just what I was thinking at the time) Another step; I hear your footstep. With my breath, I hear your call. Disappear; It’s my time now. Even goodness, Sometimes haunts. I can understand, A friend is always there. But once I’m torn It’s me, not you. I don’t want you To feel my pain. It adds to mine. I am guilty. Loneliness, Is comforting. Can you understand? I stand and fight. If that is not enough, Please then come. I ask and beg, But let me meditate. Let me seek power, From the One Who fights Through me. Don’t feel my pain. The base is covered here. And silence soothes The ache. - And so it was that time stood still - |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I think you penned your thoughts very well. And for a spur of the moment, it is worth a lifetime... |
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regards2you Member Elite
since 2002-10-01
Posts 3940California |
GG, Yes, even goodness, sometimes haunts. I understand this. To this day, feel the same. It hurts me to know someone is hurting for me. Enjoyed, Happy Holidays, Pat  ..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons.. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Thank you, For reading and replying! Honored to have such great people and poets reading Have a Merry Christ-mas Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful ending! I love those neat endings that make you just sit there a minute. |
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