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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22

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0 posted 2002-12-23 05:19 PM

Sometimes,
In the middle They tear your heart apart.
The little things,
left unsaid.
The silences. The mysteries.
Silence speaks louder than words.
Sometimes,
it feels like whiplash,
on a cold december morning.
Silence speaks louder than words.
Sometimes.

Rainbowdust
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since 2002-12-05

Posts 320
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2002-12-23 07:55 PM

I really loved this poem Kellie; you can read it from either end and I thought that was so clever! Loved the message too and the way you conveyed it!

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01

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2 posted 2002-12-23 08:01 PM

Kellie,

You have captured an absolute truth, and written it so well. Enjoyed.

Warm Regards and Happy Holidays

Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

Nightshade

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just out of reach

3 posted 2002-12-23 08:56 PM

Very good Kellie!! Enjoyed. Chris

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

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4 posted 2002-12-23 09:04 PM

Kellie,
Truth. Often painful, but truth. Well done.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

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the ass-end of space

5 posted 2002-12-24 12:11 PM

excellent work Kellie!

Midnitesun

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Gaia

6 posted 2002-12-24 02:14 AM

a cold December whiplash, ouch

passing shadows
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7 posted 2002-12-24 02:53 AM

yes, soometimes it does. Nice write.

GG
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since 2002-12-03

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Lost in thought

8 posted 2002-12-24 03:01 AM

yea it really does sometimes...
and I you've captured it all to well.

whiplash on a cold december morning..
the chill and pain of that is all to much like silence, when it speaks pain.

Good write, keep it up
A Merry Christ-mas to you

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -

secretlife
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since 2002-07-30

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Grean Earth ,,,

9 posted 2002-12-24 07:03 AM

Yeah this is right,,
I really like this poem..

Waiting to read more...

Hugessssss

Secretlife,
(Easy come,,Easy go)

Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

10 posted 2002-12-30 11:44 PM

thank you to everyone for the replies

(¨`·.·´¨) (¨`·.·´¨)
  ·.¸(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´
     ×`·.¸.·´×
    Love Always
       Kellie

vlraynes
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11 posted 2003-01-21 03:35 AM

Kellie~
Lots of truth in this write...you've said it beautifully.
This is definitely my favorite of yours.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

jellybeans
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12 posted 2003-01-21 02:41 PM

really nicely done....love the form

kram
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since 2003-01-17

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13 posted 2003-01-21 03:08 PM

very nice. I just joined the forum and am anxious to read more of your words.

Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22

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New York

14 posted 2003-01-26 01:34 AM

Kram, Thanks and welome to the forums. lol I can't believe my critque message says that lol

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