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Elan
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0 posted 2002-12-23 03:00 PM



Because of You

Tears stream quietly.
By you, I am woman, loved.
Infinity, ours.
Measured only by heartbeats.
Merry Christmas, my Darling.






© Copyright 2002 Elan - All Rights Reserved
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Gaia
1 posted 2002-12-23 03:06 PM


Tender yet somehow sad thoughts in this one. Is he gone? Maybe I've misunderstood.
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2 posted 2002-12-23 03:14 PM


yes, so loving, and a definate twinge of sadness...
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3 posted 2002-12-23 03:33 PM


Don't know if this'll make sense but I like the balance in this.  It's perfect.  Love and tears, hand in hand for the holidays.


I need a new job.  Anyone wanna pay me to do this???

EagleScorpion
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4 posted 2002-12-23 03:35 PM


merry x-mas to you as well sweetheart.
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5 posted 2002-12-23 03:57 PM


"Measured by heartbeats"...a devine way to gauge the depth and breadth of one's love for a special person...truly a beautifully expressed Christmas present..

believe in what your heart feels...

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6 posted 2002-12-23 04:13 PM


Perfectly beautiful Elan.
There is always a sort of underlying sadness to the holidays.
Have a wonderfilled magical Christmas!
~Smiles, luv and hugs, Nancy~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

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7 posted 2002-12-23 04:26 PM


Elan

The biggest love sometimes makes the most tears.   and Merry Christmas!

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8 posted 2002-12-23 06:34 PM


beautiful
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9 posted 2002-12-23 07:47 PM


I find this very intriguing and somewhat
sad,  with a sense of longing and deep love.
Beautifully written,  very tender...

Happy Holidays Elan...

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10 posted 2002-12-24 04:27 AM


not really sad to me...tears can be happy tears...very nice write!
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