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haydenjames
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since 2002-02-14
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Antigua & Barbuda

0 posted 2002-12-23 09:14 AM


"The queen bee" by: hayden james

The life of a connection,
Measured by memoirs of
Infinite bliss and abyss-like fissures
Somehow contrasted to equal present.
Yet, who can ignore the altitude
We’ve made with wings joint in
Constant fervor of passion.
Patience…
A quality made distinct with you
Despite my sheer nature…
Never a constant shelf for your lay.
Yet my most treasured moments
Always seemed to orbit round you.
Your warmth, like the sun
Seemed devoid of end.
Then, the cold did set in…
As I frolicked in search
Of self, in neglect of you.
Till one day, the keenness of your differ
Left my difficult mind astray.
Humbled by the effects
Of your one-eighty degree sting.
For your lance penetrated
A determined heart through.
Still, some things are never forgotten
Just like the aroma of a scented candle
Blown out by your lip’s breeze. I’ll
Get your lips… you scratch the match.

My poetry is at:  http://www.thehayden.org

© Copyright 2002 hayden a. james - All Rights Reserved
Larry C
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since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286
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1 posted 2002-12-23 08:37 PM


Whoa! Love the ending.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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2 posted 2002-12-24 03:28 AM


love the poem...and nice website too!

I'll have to go back for more.

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