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GOlDsparklESS
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since 2001-12-13
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central nj

0 posted 2002-12-23 01:03 AM


wherefore, my love?

moon bursts' intense illume; I gaze.
Fervent chase proclaims passion.
nonchalance umbrella vs. love monsoon.

You lose.

headlong into sacred moon, sundown’s inevitable surrender…



© Copyright 2002 Manisha Narang - All Rights Reserved
Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
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1 posted 2002-12-23 01:25 AM


beauty. Sends me back to the Elizabethan Era.. I am thinkin' shakespeare.
EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
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Here, Now, Forever
2 posted 2002-12-23 03:39 PM


had to read this several times over.

Well,

Manisha im in florida now and im havin fun.. oo my dad and brothers just got back from the beach. now i can bum a ciggarette from barry.

Love monsoon... hmm

   a bitter thirst that hurts the worst  sweptaway  by a love monsoon.

nonchalance umbrella..

hmm... im going to have to talk to you about this.

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