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to a friend |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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trees begin, along the winds journey, scattered seeds bring forth childhood dreams, captives of fate, too soon, they separate as seasons go round the circle, friendships renew again, branches reach and caress, reveal truths of time's passing, too soon they become only shadows again, a mere cover for rooted connections, forever embedded deep beneath earth's superficial gate [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (12-22-2002 09:05 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I love this, it circles 'round in my head. I'm keeping it, to re-read again later. Thank you. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Sweet words M thanks raph |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
I found this rather comforting to read. Thank you, Sunkissed. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
The opening here was so thoughtful, loved this... you carry the metaphor through with a gentle meandering of cyclic life that suits my mood beautifully tonight. The final metaphor of earth as materialism was exquisite. Felt myself hit the ground. Smile. (time to end the solstice, eh?) I guess it's time to put down the magic wand... grin. Thanks for this. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice write, I'm sure your friend would love this one...just like I do |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Her friend does love this. Her real friend not the flaky imitation kind. Finding an old friend is like finding a lost treasure and I am glad I got to polish my treasure again! |
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