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rm711
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0 posted 2002-12-22 05:57 PM



I would give the whole world
Just to stop you from feeling the cold
All I want is for you to smile eternally
Even if that means never seeing me

I could live without you
As long as I know you live in heaven
That your world is perfect in every way
That would be all I need today

You hold more inside your world
Than my life could ever posses
You speak as if an angel
Your words make sense to all

Look me in the eye
And tell me that you care
I know you can’t
I’m just here to pick you up

I mean nothing to no one
I’m a solitary nobody
I’m a lonely lost soul
But I will never stop loving you

And even though you don’t appreciate me
I will carry on being me
And try to make your life the best place it could possibly be
Because that’s what you mean to me.

"Some men see things as they are and say why? I dream things that never were and say why not?"
Rosie Mitchell

© Copyright 2002 Rosie Mitchell - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2002-12-22 06:11 PM


Sounds like an unconditional love letter to me. Be there, no matter what.
Rainbowdust
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since 2002-12-05
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2 posted 2002-12-22 09:03 PM


What an example of true selfless love, and what a beautiful poem!

You hold more inside your world
Than my life could ever posses...

They were my favourite lines.

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
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3 posted 2002-12-22 09:16 PM





Very beautiful selfless love. To be able to let go, or, even never have but, still to want the very best for someone, that is remarkable. True love.

Hugs and warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

passing shadows
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4 posted 2002-12-23 02:48 AM


now that's what I call unconditional love...
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