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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2002-12-22 12:11 PM






Breathless

When our hearts are together
looking out over the horizon
of tomorrow,
a certain type of peace
fills my soul~

The tick tock of time
stands still
as I am held in your embrace,
and together we stand
upon the shores of the future~

Each drop of golden sunlight
seems that much brighter,
every sip from the cup of life
tastes vintage~

We dance in sunsets glow,
placing our dreams
in the hands
of destiny~

Like an angel
sent from heaven
you warm a spirit
that had seemingly
forgotten how to fly~

Oceans of brilliant blues
can not compare to the depths
of your eyes when you gaze
into my heart~

Each touch is a cherished moment
that can not slip away
with the passing of time
as they are embedded in my heart
for eternity~

To simply
hear you whisper my name
and be held in your love
is a precious gift of heart~

Each moment spent with you
leaves me
~breathless~


(Repost from open 19
revised 12-22-02)


I know that you can 'read' me
but can you  'hear'  "me"?

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (12-22-2002 12:13 PM).]

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Enchantress
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1 posted 2002-12-22 12:19 PM


Oh so beautiful sweet lady!
He sounds like a very special love.
Gently and perfectly penned.
~Hugs~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2002-12-22 12:21 PM


He is the one who catches me when I fall and helps me to stand strong again Nancy.....indeed very special.....(at least to me anyhow....*grinz*)
Thanks hon.

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with you
3 posted 2002-12-22 12:23 PM


You know this is gorgeous
Magnus
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4 posted 2002-12-22 12:43 PM


Like an angel
sent from heaven
you warm a spirit
that had seemingly
forgotten how to fly~


Beautiful,  and I love those lines...well done Donna..

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2002-12-22 12:43 PM


Gentle Spirit - you do leave me breathless with this write, a'hhhhhhhh....

BC

[This message has been edited by Bill Charles (12-22-2002 12:44 PM).]

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6 posted 2002-12-22 02:06 PM




(smiles) Oh Donna, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this made me cry reading it as you golden heart pours out with loves smile over tehse words, yay! (kiss on cheek) May your love always make you feel heavenbound, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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7 posted 2002-12-22 02:23 PM



Simply beautiful. Enjoyed greatly!


Hugs and warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2002-12-22 02:24 PM




i miss my angel even more when i read this

Paul Wilson
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9 posted 2002-12-23 02:43 AM


Donna~ Beautiful words and thoughts of your love for that special person in your life.

The gift of love
Given to us from God above
May your love forever soar on wings of a dove

" To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you "

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10 posted 2002-12-23 02:44 AM


just like in the fairytale! (except much better)
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