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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2002-12-22 12:06 PM


“BREATH OF YOU”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~
I loved you many years
ago but never knew you
existed until the day
came that we met...

I was sure it was you
in my dreams, for
when our lips touched
together my heart
skipped not one beat
but two, and the inside
of me was on fire with
the breath of you...
~~~~

© Copyright 2002 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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1 posted 2002-12-22 12:13 PM


*Sigh*  You are such a romantic Bill!
Love this love song you sing.
Well done!
~Hugs~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2002-12-22 12:15 PM


A beautiful and romantic verse of love that you write Bill.....that moment when we know we are with the one we were meant to be.
Well done.

garysgirl
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3 posted 2002-12-22 12:17 PM


Bill my friend, I'm so glad that you are a "hopeless romantic"......otherwise you might not be writing such beautiful love poems. I love it.......  

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2002-12-22 12:20 PM


Bill,
Your hooked. LOL enjoyed.

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-12-22 01:55 PM




(smiles) Oh Bill, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I know just how you feel for I believe God really made me and Joanna true lovers and I have always loved her since I was born deep down! (sigh) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

regards2you
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since 2002-10-01
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6 posted 2002-12-22 02:40 PM




Bill,

Another of your wonderful romantic poems. Sometimes lips don't even have to touch. Sometimes, we just know!

Hugs and warm regards, Pat


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
7 posted 2002-12-22 02:51 PM


Oh yeah...Beautifully said. TD
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