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dont want to fall in love
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dont want to fall in love |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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not looking to fall in love right now, dont want the inevitable emptiness it may allow, my sleeves tattered and worn, in for repair, my heart freshly torn, dont want to fall in love, just want to be rocked all night long, spun around like a top, make me beg ,"baby,dont stop", taken for a whirl of a ride, down on my knees, over the side, pin me up against the wall, i just want to play,for now,thats all, play a little game, then forget your name, teacher,schoolgirl, lock me up,forget the key, turn the tables, make u beg for more of me, no, not looking to fall in love, just wanna be rocked all night long, and maybe, in between the time we meet again, a sign that you care at all, my friend [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (12-22-2002 04:51 PM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess Reads like an open invitation, LOL enjoyed. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inkedgoddess - just to be rocked tenderly in a warm embrace. Lovely, very lovely... BC |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
sometimes being in "love" is too much of a roller coaster ride, emotional and draining. I can understand the need to just be for a night~! Atov |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What a write! Clear and crisp. Hugs from ThisDiamond |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I choose schoolgirl, love a girl in a private/catholic schoolgirl uniform. It's so wrong it's right. I've said to much, back to the shadows i go. |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
sing songy sugarfeel. but with a bit extra, raar. :smirk: just kidding, i enjoyed the poem |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
why thank you christian, i really would have rocked, but i had to make the R rating you know........... i cant do the X rated over here, seymour,,,,,just letting myself go,thats all aenimal.....mmmmmmmm so wrong, its right.... bill,,,,,,, i gotta soil you a bit one day! [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (12-22-2002 02:20 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This is sooooooo beautifully passionate, sweet friend, love can be a confusing thing but also there are many possibilities in nurturing the essence of it! (big hugggsssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 this brought tears...I can relate tonight |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Interesting...James |
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