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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2002-12-22 10:09 AM




Prismatic....

Pragmatic
is some
“down-to-earth”
so how then does a beautiful mind
replace the prag
with pris-m’s
worth…

see the pipe
of thought in spire
see the light
through all the mire
see the raven
tear the soul
see the book
of Word in whole
see beyond the pass
of barrier
see the abyss
and find love merrier

see the man of light
gone past the aged
see the light
hear the sage’d
see the rainbow
t’ward the end

and come around
and come again…


see a crystal
in all souls
allow the dark
only but foothold
for the stepping up
and stepping on
and seeing past
to see beyond…

replace the prag
with a pris’m
and see beyond
lockdown of ism’s

Pragmatic?  Oh, there’s
thought in that…
but look beyond
the hourglass
and see the world
as it conspires
and lift a thought
a tad bit higher…

© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-22 10:26 AM


Totally a WOW! Sunshine, this should be out there, published for many to see. Very well done!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Magnus
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2 posted 2002-12-22 10:46 AM


You go,  this brought to thought many different
thoughts...imagine that....eh?

Enchantress
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3 posted 2002-12-22 12:01 PM


Beautiful write Karilea..
with many a thought to ponder.
Very unusual and fascinating picture.
~Hugs~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

Rex Allen McCoy
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4 posted 2002-12-22 12:08 PM


I'll try

wonderful thoughts and writing here

Duncan
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5 posted 2002-12-22 07:50 PM


I had an expectation by the fourth line...and wasn't dissapointed throughout.  Love the way this 'played'.
scorpio
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right...there
6 posted 2002-12-22 09:18 PM


You made me think with this one..like a ray of light passing through a prism this write splits into various facets of enlightenment..

believe in what your heart feels...

Miah
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7 posted 2002-12-22 09:38 PM


Wow is right.  this was awesome!!
Martie
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8 posted 2002-12-22 09:43 PM


Karilea

Thoughtful and thoughtfilled...you write with the spirit of light.  

garysgirl
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9 posted 2002-12-22 09:49 PM


                     

(me..........leaving speechless)

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10 posted 2002-12-23 02:41 AM


definate enlightenment here...seeing, exploring, beyond the every day...
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