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Sports Car |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
I loved that little black sports car you drove it suited you SCREAMING look at me I'm exspensive flashy here today, gone tomorrow I remember that night we had sex on the hood mating like animals in the middle of nowhere I stared up at the stars ( here today, gone tomorrow ) as you moaned and shuddered your release that car suited you SCREAMING look at me I'm exspensive flashy here today, gone tomorrow My hands are two travelers, they've crossed oceans & land, yet they are too small on the continent of your skin....wandering, wandering, I could spend |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"here today, gone tomorrow" that pretty much sums it up.... some of them don't even need to have the flashy car...  |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
whew!! sounds like quite a ride..and back to earth again--enjoyed! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
HMM. Was that a Porsche by any chance? Good write. That hood will never recover completely. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew, heavy write! I loved it! comparing a person to a car, it's a great theme! |
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