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shattering silence
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shattering silence |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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your heart shattering silence almost steals the full moons thunder tonight, lost in this diamond lit blackness, i await sleep to cradle me amid the beauty and pain of the blanket i wear tonight |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inkedgoddess - words well said, thoughts well written... BC |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Tis why I don't neglect esbat. Drop that blanket, and run sky-clad through the pain!  Your work is ever intriguing. |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
This piece is a prime example of my favorite poems.....the pure emotion that jumps out at you and refuses to be ignored....I LOVED IT! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thank you serenity ; really a compliment coming from you, do you know anything about lovespells.? |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
inked you never cease to amaze |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Aww the silence and the thunder the blackness and the blanket, a natural phenomena that goes hand in hand it seems. I so enjoyed the brilliance of your ink~ |
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Kellie_Cantrell Senior Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667New York |
I don't connect with this poem so I am just going to say that it is a good poem. I have no place critiqueing this poem because I do not connect with it. SO good job and keep writing. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I await sleep too |
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