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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2002-12-21 05:18 PM


The windows are wrapped with cotton snow.
The lights are rainabows in my room.
Something is missing from the house-
A Christmas tree, a Christmas tree
And all the presents under the Christmas tree.

We can't afford to buy a little fig,
So I buy a little decorative tree,
And put up some socks on the window
For my  l i t t l e  ba-bies.

Together we make some wishes
And put them all in the socks,
Waiting Jesus, the real Santa,
To make a Christmas a real home-
F o r  l o v i n g  a n d  c a r i n g.
In dreams, we wish to hear from you,
And thank you for
All the care
You've shown during the past year.

//the above is fiction, yet I really wish I can have Christmas sock to put all my wish in it.

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (12-22-2002 06:40 PM).]

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Temptress
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Mobile, AL
1 posted 2002-12-22 12:32 PM


I'm not feeling this exact scene this year, but I am feeling something similar. *sigh* I have a different perspective I guess, and i'm trying to keep it positive.

You've touched a certain part of me with this. Thank you.

When this kind of thing happens...I suppose its better to find the gifts in our hearts instead of in a store.

~~I Love You~~

enchantingvamp
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since 2002-12-21
Posts 214
Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas!
2 posted 2002-12-22 01:09 AM


yeah i dont feel like this is a very merry x mas either........if you have an extra sock for me please mail it over......i could stuff it full

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