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Suetang
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0 posted 2002-12-21 04:14 PM



Picture by Josephine Wall

* * * *

I may be falling into love
Or drifting slowly out to sea
Within my fantasy world
Is where you'll often find me

When I need to escape
When I need to be set free
Into my fantasy world
Is where I'll take me

Love and peace surround me
Here the days are always fine
There is no amount of distance
Between your heart and mine

I stand amongst the flowers
So much joy do they bring
Many birds live in this paradise
How I love to hear them sing

They take to the skies
So very graceful they are
And as night begins to fall
The sky is covered in stars

This blanket of diamonds
Shines down brightly on me
And if I pull back the blanket
A slice of heaven I will see

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2002 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
1 posted 2002-12-21 04:22 PM


Sue, can I please come with you?

This is pure ecstasy and Ron printed it out for me to read. The picture is breathtaking. Gosh, she is so talented. Wouldn't you just love to own one of her paintings?

Hugs, Marti  (via Ron)

Let our love circle the world and
bring Peace to all this Holiday Season.

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2 posted 2002-12-21 04:26 PM


The imagery of Jo certainly does add to the
vision painted within your words....blends
well...keep doing this..

Suetang
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3 posted 2002-12-21 04:33 PM


Ron & Marti

Thank you so much for your lovely words, and yes, she is such a multi talented artist and I've fallen in love with her work.  I would love to own one of her paintings.

Barry

I'm so glad you like the pictures too and thank you for your lovely comment.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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4 posted 2002-12-21 04:35 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwwwww, this is sooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I just love your beautiful fantasy poetry just as I love Josephine Wall as her art is so gorgeous and a place I wish I could really live! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Suetang
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5 posted 2002-12-21 04:40 PM


Thank you Noah for your kind words and yes, Jo's work is absolutely breathtaking.

Take care.....Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Goodknight
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6 posted 2002-12-22 02:14 PM


Sue - the picture is good and goes with the poem well but your poetry is so special - thanks for taking us along for a glimpse of your fantasy world - Paul
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7 posted 2002-12-23 01:00 PM


Sue:  Beautiful poem and we all need a fantasy world we can escape to sometimes. Yours is certainly a lovely place to be!

Betty Lou Hebert

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8 posted 2002-12-23 03:12 PM


Love this fantasy, Sue! Cool picture.
Now, let's work on finding out how to turn those fantasy sights into reality.
Enjoyed this view.

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