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0 posted 2002-12-21 01:17 PM


Why?
Why, when I read my own thoughts, those from so deep
within the bowel, the soul, do I cry?

Tears have fallen as the rains of life.  Tears have stained
the cloth and skin of me...Tears continue to cleanse
and purge...to bring forth the life of who I am...
And share...

Why, I ask?
Why would a man sit for decades, silent to the world
in speech of heart?  Silent to his own self in confiding
of that which hurt, or brought to the face a tender
smile, a twinkle of eye that would show in reflect
the warmth, warmth wanting to come forth into
the night of write...

As the candle dims, as the wick shortens,  
the quill and pen remain ever sturdy.
A hand fills the well with fresh ink and...

a poet, a man....reborn...

Lives.....

© Copyright 2002 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-21 01:51 PM


YES!!!  Extremely well done Barry!
You continue to astound me as your creativity
grows in leaps and bounds!
~Hugs~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

regards2you
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2 posted 2002-12-21 01:51 PM



Barry,

This is incredibly beautiful and touches the depth of my soul.
I love it when a poem comes from heart and you can feel the honesty.
Enjoyed greatly and re-read, tearing my eyes.

Hugs,  Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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3 posted 2002-12-21 01:52 PM


"As the candle dims, as the wick shortens,  
the quill and pen remain ever sturdy.
A hand fills the well with fresh ink and...

a poet, a man....reborn...

Lives....."


this is just beautiful....I don't know what else to say

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4 posted 2002-12-21 01:53 PM


cleansing and purging...that's what tears do, yes...
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5 posted 2002-12-21 02:05 PM


Beautiful gary, i too have been released through words. Thank you very much for this

raph

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6 posted 2002-12-21 04:14 PM



Your muse
has been
whispering...

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