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Zinsser
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0 posted 2002-12-21 01:15 PM



My eyes gaze into
Those that have not changed
Though time has all else
Not the same
And once again
Our love remains
Through raging storm
And rocky shore

You’ve held me up
When soul does weep
I’ve reinforced you
With lovers strength
Sparks do fly
When equals meet
To withstand all
As disaster weeps


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Gaia
1 posted 2002-12-21 01:24 PM


How wonderful, to have eyes that gaze back with enough strength and constancy to weather any storm, withstand any disaster.
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2 posted 2002-12-21 01:26 PM


This is a very courageous write...One of
strength and resolve...of compassion and
love..  Written so well..

passing shadows
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3 posted 2002-12-21 01:55 PM


nice to know some things don't change, huh?
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