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vandana
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0 posted 2002-12-21 09:55 AM



This Is another day
To shine my dreams away
We have been so much
This Is the time
To tell you
All the best times
We had
Now know you well
Sitting here
All the papers laying
On the floor
Picking them
One by one
This will be another song
just for you
This Is the day to sing
Another song for you
and me
The weather seems so dark and cold
Let my heart be hold
Into time and wind
Can't get off this song
of my mind
I like to sing this
another song
Tonight
Another song on my mind
Don't let this moment end
This Is so special for me
To sing another song
tonight
Because you are all
tonight
Another song.......

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SEA
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1 posted 2002-12-21 09:58 AM


"All the papers laying
On the floor
Picking them
One by one
This will be another song
just for you"


liked this part best, and enjoyed the song

Midnitesun
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2 posted 2002-12-21 10:15 AM


Enjoyed your song, Vandana. Please keep singing. Peace, and Happy Holidays to you.
Bill Charles
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3 posted 2002-12-21 01:00 PM


vandana- a song well sung, sounds like a beautiful one not to forget...

BC

Magnus
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4 posted 2002-12-21 01:28 PM


Vandana,  this is by far one of your best.


passing shadows
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5 posted 2002-12-21 01:41 PM


I can hear the song...enjoyed this
Enchantress
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6 posted 2002-12-21 01:53 PM


Vandana, as Magnus said...This is your best!!
Wonderful!!
~Hugs~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2002-12-21 04:55 PM




(sigh) This is so heartfelt, sweet friend, I wish for loves song to always sing in your heart and never come to a close! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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