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Sunshine
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0 posted 2002-12-21 09:28 AM






A
Star
Came to Us
From the heavens, that We
Might Behold
His Love
For
M
a
n



And thus               His Love
Became                 His Gift
To have                To Hold
To cherish and to share with All
A reminder that He died for our Sins
That we may forever Live.



[This message has been edited by Sunshine (12-21-2002 09:30 AM).]

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Bill Charles
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1 posted 2002-12-21 09:30 AM


Sunshine - amen Sunshine, amen...

BC

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2 posted 2002-12-21 09:37 AM


Thank you for this beautiful treasure Karilea.
~Hugs and luv, Nancy Lee~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

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3 posted 2002-12-21 09:39 AM


beautifully said, beautifully done
Merry Christmas

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4 posted 2002-12-21 09:58 AM


nice
Magnus
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5 posted 2002-12-21 11:31 AM


Yes,  I think a simple AMEN sums it right up,  well done Karilea...
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6 posted 2002-12-21 02:35 PM


seems appro that the sun write of the brightest star in the heavens....
so lovley Kari.

Will the wind remember the names it has blown in the past?
With this crutch, its old age and wisdom, it whispers no ... this will be the last.

jh

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7 posted 2002-12-21 02:38 PM


OMG! Karilea, it just came to me who you remind me of....Joyce Meyer...

what a creative write!

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8 posted 2002-12-22 06:34 AM


What a beautiful presentation
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