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WhiteRose
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somebody's dungeon

0 posted 2002-12-20 11:35 PM



At last fear has a sound
   the cracked voice
over the phone
    the nurse shaped clone
who delivers with emotionless
  words that blur together
heavy now the tether
   of fear that grips my heart.

They're pictures
   in black and shades of gray

      a spot

so small, so small

      not supposed to be there

dear God, not at all

     fear now has a sound

and I can't bear the noise.

WhiteRose 12/20/02

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1 posted 2002-12-21 12:55 PM


very painful read, hope all is ok for you
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2 posted 2002-12-21 03:12 AM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Anne, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, I hope all is alright as I know how aching it can be to see a picture through negative film! (sad sigh) This is touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Anne, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

vlraynes
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3 posted 2002-12-21 03:18 AM



Anne~
I could feel the fear in your words as I read this.
You've expressed it very well and very powerfully.
I sincerely hope that all is okay with you.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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4 posted 2002-12-21 10:07 AM


Oh no. Not the spot. The fear came through clearly in this. This may sound strange, but I hope the message will be 'negative.'

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (12-21-2002 02:03 PM).]

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5 posted 2002-12-21 02:00 PM


I know what you mean. Get it taken care of soon Anne...and you know God is there with you, as are all of us here at Passions.
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