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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I kind of wish now that I’d kissed her in that elevator knowing I won’t get another chance to stop between floors. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Timing...it's everything. And what were you tihnking?  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Duncan....... Were ya'll alone...  Just wondering........ HeeHee  "Love makes the world go around" |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
it's this kind of regret, that I understand completely tugging at some heart strings my dear  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile. my reply? I wish I hadn't hesitated when the elevator did. I wish I would have swallowed pride. I wish I would have swallowed...his.  I hope it was good for you too. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Serenity? loved your reply |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Short and sweet as so much of life is. Ed |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
uhm, D? duh? interesting little quippet... might not have meant much with it, but it does reflect back on the classic "opportunity only knocks once" theme in a few contemporary words. i almost never watch television... but, every once in a while, i have to watch a match or two on the PGA tour... i caught a commercial a couple of months ago that showed this guy getting into an elevator after this other guy (who had just sprayed some fantastic deodorant all over the place) left. just as the door's getting ready to close, in comes this incredibly beautiful woman (oh yeah, she was HOT!!!). she sniffs the air, then casts a seductive-shy look at this guy (who's stereotypically normal). He smiles shyly at her, and she inches closer... the door closes - - and then opens on him (clothes in disarray) and her (pushing down her skirt, with her hair mussed and a big, satisfied smile on her face). this made me think of that, just thought i'd share. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) Oh Duncan, I think we can all understand this kind of regret, sweet friend, I hope now your heart is elevated with such love that never stops running its service, God Bless You, I send angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Duncan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Duncan~ I'm loving this. So much said in so few words. Nicely done, my friend. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
distilled regret...burns as it goes down... RB?(yeah...you nailed it) (Duncan does just as much with less, but with more)(moth logic) (what is it with you guys and elevator fantasies)  hehwakka wakka Will the wind remember the names it has blown in the past? |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
press the Stop button...and stay out of view of the camera!!! enjoyed!"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So what Christopher is saying, if you'd only have used the correct deodorant... Ah, he's sneaky that way... Enjoyed the poem, Duncan...but you are always a great read! [This message has been edited by Sunshine (12-21-2002 08:13 AM).] |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Duncan - perhaps between floors will present itself once again... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Amazing Duncan...wish I could have seen this one happen. You mean it's not true? huh? I still love it! ~Hugs~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL. I've seen you on the elevator. You are smiling, waiting patiently for her to make the first move. Both of you anticipating the first touch. Door opens, she exits, leaves you standing there, anticipating the solitude of night. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I have a key to shut down the elevator that I can send you... for a small fee, of course...LOL |
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enchantingvamp Member
since 2002-12-21
Posts 214Indiana, & NO there is NOT more than corn in Indiana, oughta go back to texas! |
I loved this.... too bad we all miss too many chances Nature has a funny way of breaking that which will not bend....Jewell |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
I think I recognize this elevator!!  You can never win or lose |
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