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inkedgoddess
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since 11-19-2002
Posts 7522
Ohio


0 posted 12-20-2002 11:14 AM       View Profile for inkedgoddess   Email inkedgoddess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for inkedgoddess


why did you stop,
talking to me,
your dreamgirl,
was the fantasy all you wanted,
im sorry,babe, i had to cross the line,
and come off the page,
had to see you as flesh and blood,
had to blow my cover and show you too,
that i bleed,
but youve always known that,
i've always spilled my guts,
worn my heart inside out,for you,
even told you my game plan as i played it,
cause you breathed life back into my slumber,
took the dive off the dark ledge to your light,
gave u all, a taken woman could, put it on the line
and took the risks,
but why wont you,
let me see,
what the hell is the cross that your bearing,
its only me.........
i cant cage or chain you, you know,
i've got to stay right here for now,
im a safe one,
but you've gotta open up,
you,re slowly dying inside,
losing your art,
im here,
to be,
your jesus, your mesiah, your buddah,
ive lived through a lot of crap,
and yours wont blow me away either,
im not afraid,
cause i already seen the beauty,
in your beast,
just please dont be a pedofile,murderer,rapist or
torturer of animals,
so talk to me.................

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Cpat Hair
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since 06-05-2001
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1 posted 12-20-2002 11:17 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

raw... and open.. I'd say someone should talk before you kick butt... or walk away.


Toerag
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since 07-29-99
Posts 5839
Ala bam a


2 posted 12-20-2002 11:18 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Whew....strong one....."please don't be a pedofile, murderer, rapist, a Balladeer...etc.,.....Really a hopeful request I'd say...
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 11-19-2002
Posts 7522
Ohio


3 posted 12-20-2002 11:26 AM       View Profile for inkedgoddess   Email inkedgoddess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for inkedgoddess

is balladeer so bad?
Toerag
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Ala bam a


4 posted 12-20-2002 11:29 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

Of course not....his mommy thought he was exceptional?....LOL....
regards2you
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since 10-01-2002
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California


5 posted 12-20-2002 11:44 AM       View Profile for regards2you   Email regards2you   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for regards2you

Inked,

You left out sociopath, psychopath and bikepath....(off it into the bushes)

Some ~things~ are best if left alone.
Interesting poem, and hope you are successful in whatever you desire.


Warmest regards, Pat


  

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 12-20-2002 12:46 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

very intense write of raw emotion and very well presented.  Enjoyed the read, thank you.
RSWells
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since 06-17-2001
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7 posted 12-20-2002 03:34 PM       View Profile for RSWells   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSWells

Some see a green light change to yellow. Some never pass stop despite it's glowing red intensity. As long as it's a round trip ticket, catch another bus.
passing shadows
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since 08-26-99
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displaced


8 posted 12-20-2002 03:36 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

yeah, really raw here. I like it and agree with the others above.
Aenimal
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since 11-18-2002
Posts 7451
the ass-end of space


9 posted 12-20-2002 06:30 PM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

Straight from the heart inked I know it sounds hypocrytical of me but don't let it get you down.
serenity blaze
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10 posted 12-20-2002 06:33 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

You DO write with from that honest place.

I call it just "dropping the blanket"--

it's exactly what I try to acheive every time I write.

I applaud you for that, and for this.

Enjoying your work!
Bill Charles
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since 07-11-2000
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highways, & byways, for now


11 posted 12-20-2002 08:03 PM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

inkedgoddess - you sure do write some penetrating stuff. Nice work...

BC
EmmaRose
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12 posted 10-19-2013 10:15 PM       View Profile for EmmaRose   Email EmmaRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EmmaRose

Good golly girl you were soo needy, thank the Lord you woke up !!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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