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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-12-20 08:08 AM



Wax’s Desire


I saw the flame
across glass dance
two together
created romance
atop green
scented wax
once solid now liquid
pouring tracks
kiss burnt air
scented drift
something shared
by two a gift
sweet melting
in it’s true desire
a life unlived
unless touched by fire

“life is not about breathing moments, it is about moments that leave you breathless.” author unknown


It is like looking for a blizzard in a glas

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
1 posted 2002-12-20 08:19 AM


gotta have the fire,
the love and the pain, all part of the passion

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
2 posted 2002-12-20 10:10 AM


yeah, what inkedgoddess said

a quite finely written analogy

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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