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quik
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since 2002-11-27
Posts 91
Dinwiddie,Virginia

0 posted 2002-12-19 09:54 PM


You know when I’m with you
You make me feel so good
And if I could, I would never let go
I would be with you all day
I would never leave and always stay
With you because I Love You
And there is nothing in this world I wouldn’t do
See, is you that I adore
And being with you forever more
Because I would like to explore the world
That holds the future for us
Plus, there would be things to discuss
I want you in my life
I want you to be my wife
You got it all, the beauty, the finesse
But I have to confess
That I’m not obsessed
It’s just that God has blessed me
With this opportunity to live my life to the best
Instead of me going through hard mess
Of trouble, dignity, and distress
You know what I was looking for
A beautiful, talented, young woman to walk through that door
But before I be committed to someone
I want to make sure I’m the one


© Copyright 2002 Antonio Duran Weary - All Rights Reserved
Laney
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since 2002-12-18
Posts 85
Illinois
1 posted 2002-12-19 10:08 PM


Theres definately something beautiful going on in your life..(wink wink) and a beautiful poem to express it!  

--Alana

Salty
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since 2002-11-23
Posts 669
Texas
2 posted 2002-12-19 10:16 PM


Well until you join with her (and hopefully that will happen for you) she has provided the use of a muse for you.

~Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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3 posted 2002-12-20 04:01 AM


best to take it slow...
Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-12-20 04:31 AM




(sigh) Oh Antonio, this is such a sincere and chivalrous offering of love, sweet friend, I hope she accepts as you are so worthy of true happiness! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, best wishes to you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Antonio, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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