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regards2you
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0 posted 12-19-2002 09:00 AM       View Profile for regards2you   Email regards2you   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for regards2you



A slow
bathing,
lip smooth run

feathering your being
with
butterfly kisses
of frilly lashes

like sight, unseen
tickling
your flush
delicately,

dazzling us.

And, our alignment
of hips,
as we Eskimo kiss,
heightens bliss,

awakening,

my deepest want
and meeting
your greatest need.


~It's all in the eyes!~


.
.
.


..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"


[This message has been edited by regards2you (12-20-2002 06:01 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 Patricia L.Thompson - All Rights Reserved
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Beautiful!
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2 posted 12-19-2002 09:15 AM       View Profile for gemjop   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for gemjop

loved. patricia, i always look forward to seeing your next post. your poetry always has a distinctive flow.
lots of love, gemmaxxxxxxxx

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

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3 posted 12-19-2002 09:30 AM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

Pat, I love it......  

(I knew I would, though, if you wrote it)

Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem with us. The love in you shines through very brightly, friend.    

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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Sparkling  

Such wonder to behold...ThisDiamond
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5 posted 12-19-2002 09:34 AM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

A absolutely warm and delightful write Pat.  Very enjoyed!
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ooooOOooooOOoooo .. tish tosh!

sasssssy. this is tasty, i love it.

yum, :bite:

***** [*****]

-chris.
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Very beautiful and softly sensual Pat.
Much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

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Sigheyes,

Thanks for the reply. Glad you thought it beautiful.

Gemtop,

Thank you for replying. Appreciate it.

Ethel,
I told you I would write it, but
the eskimo and butterfly kisses....
I told you about, well, a baby theme wouldn't work well, so had to get imaginative and spice it up a little....a lot! I knew you'd love it, too. smiling....glad you did, yes, this is indeed ~loving~

ThisDiamond,

Nice compliment. Thank you for taking the time.

Gentle Spirit,

So glad you read and enjoyed. Thanks.

Christian,

A 5-star, from you? Glad you love it.

Enchantress,

Glad you read and for your lovely reply.  Thanks so much.

Hugs to you all, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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yes, it is...so I've been told.
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Oh my...

The stars will shine when I am gone,
the earth will turn on as before,
the gulls, still race along the shore,
the morning star, still kiss the dawn

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Is it...James
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The eyes say so much...soft caressing write,Pat..

believe in what your heart feels...

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regards2you - I love butterfly kisses...

BC
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Pat....girl,  are ya trying to warm the
weather up?  WEll...ya did it!!!

Nicely done,  like the descriptions...
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Pat, I just think there's nothing better than butterfly kisses. This was so snuggly special.

Hugs ~ Marti

Let our love circle the world and
bring Peace to all this Holiday Season.

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(sigh) Awwwwwwwwwww, this is soooooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, this is an Eskimo kiss of a gorgeous love poem! (kiss on cheek) I wish for this joy to always touch your heart, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Patricia, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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"feathering your being with butterfly kisses" is one of the original things I've picked out. Good to know that passion is an eternal flame that never burns out. Hope to read more of you.

[This message has been edited by winston (12-20-2002 07:56 AM).]

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Pat...a sweet sensation, told with great style.  
Christopher
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interesting. i am curious about the connection between eyes and eskimo kisses? just being nosey (no pun intended!)

have you ever heard "Butterfly Kisses" by Bob Carlisle. Nothing like this, but a cool song.
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I love butterfly kisses, birdie kisses, Eskimo kisses, Fren** kisses (whoops! that one kind of slipped out!)  tehe

Precious poetry, from a precious poetess!

warm hugs,
Linda
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I'm giving this one to my boyfriend...we had an argument just last week about Butterfly kisses.  He said they were short little peck kisses....and I said NO, they are the fluttering of eyes ...meeting.  *S*


Oh I love being right...and this is the perfect poem to prove it.  Thank You!!!!


Salty

In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you.
--Deepak Chop

regards2you
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Thanks to all who've responded. Glad you like this. Hugs, Pat

Christopher,

The connection between eyes and eskimo kisses would be the face. Tsk !
Being silly.... and love making at it's finest.

Don't quite understand your question and no, I don't think I've heard the song.

It's all in the eyes is in reference to "feathering your being with butterfly kisses", but, also love is telling "in the eyes"....(2 meanings)

An Eskimo kiss is rubbing noses, so short of being too explicit, that would have been next position taken...


Use your own imagination, these two do not have a boring sex life!!!

I could have ended the poem at dazzling us....but, a little too short  

the two phrases: butterfly kisses and eskimo kisses were in a conversation that morning I had regardg. my grandson, and I said, "Hey, those two phrases would be great in a poem!" I choose not to write a baby poem....

but incorprated the phrases in an "adult" poem.... Why? Because I wanted to...

Thanks for asking and I hope this explains a little more.....
So glad you read and commented.

Hugs and warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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Salty,

Smiling here. Yes, it is in the eyelashes, swept across skin...like most delicate feathering.....

When my daughter was a small child we always shared "butterfly kisses"...
on our faces....

I've taught my baby grandson to eskimo kiss and he belly laughs every time, and am trying for butterfly kisses on his fat little cheeks but he hasn't gained enough eye control to do it, or quite get it yet......

and if you see note above is how this poem came about. I realized "butterfly kisses" can very much be apart of love making, too.....

Didn't want to write a baby poem. Am tryig to be creative and write from brain not emotion....a baby poem, for one thing, probably would be too sickeningly sweet....cause I do get all gaga over children...smiling here....

Thanks for your reply Pat

Why did I write this. Am trying to write daily....these phrases just a starting point.

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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