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In the Month of Remember
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In the Month of Remember |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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In the Month of Remember What does it hurt then, Remembering ~ Seems quite innocent If we chance upon A moment In the month of remember, A dateless time, With only a pen to guide us Only a page to inspire A moment Unsurpassed as never before Or ever will be, Again. So I ask you, What if We take a lifetime of Remembers Encapsulate them Into this Moment And make it A Life’s span… Would you love with me there? ~*~ to Janet Marie and Martie, for a poem, and a comment… I shall never forget. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
A lifetime of love held in a month of remember and how beautifully you put it. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
this is interesting, a look at our lives in one rush, a memory indeed~! I liked it! Atov~ ~I envy those who have perfected the art of being~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
So I ask you, What if We take a lifetime of Remembers Encapsulate them Into this Moment And make it A Life’s span… Would you love with me there?" --------------------------------------------- Beautiful, perhaps...a moment.. somewhere in time? ~Hugs~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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sigheyes Member
since 2001-04-25
Posts 323the winds of destiny |
This poem is as lovely as our sunshine is! [This message has been edited by sigheyes (12-19-2002 09:00 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
another great write, a real thinker. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Karilea, I wanted to respond to this earlier today......I didnt because I didnt know quite what to say... I still do not have the words....... just know that it speaks softly.......and I love it. Hugs. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sweet Karilea (or sweet Caroline)..... This is as beautiful as you are, sweet Sunshine. What would we do without our precious memories? And to be able to write about them is precious, too. Thank you, dear friend, for your gift of your wonderful poetry. We all love you, Lady.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Kind of like suppressed files.... I really like this. Your thoughts and the way you express this. Made me remember a few things  ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Honestly, I love the month of remember. Great write Sunshine. TD |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Said so elegantly, from a lady. One who I shall always remember through my month of remember, each year until... forever!! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You folks are terrific...thank you so much for taking a moment to leave a thought... |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
I'm there. And what a lovely place to meet.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea....There are some memories that are forever all the time. Thank you for this. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
beautiful... you know, I always find it interesting to wonder what exactly the poet writing something was going through at a time, or the exact way they dealt with an emotion ..yea that was off subject. But anyway, memories are amazing things though.. they can be so hurtful too. Enjoyed. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Exquisite, Karilea.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Dr Pepper Freak Member
since 2003-01-30
Posts 72CA |
What a poem, brought to mind some things to remember, both good and bad...yet happy to have both. I have read a couple of your poems now and am just awstruck by your talent and expression of words! Beautiful works once again with this one! It's not the load that breaks you down, it's the way you carry it. ~ Lena Horne |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
Quote: So I ask you, What if We take a lifetime of Remembers Encapsulate them Into this Moment We would have the sunshine of your heart creating magic. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
you have encapsulated the moment and made it truly a month of remember. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Neeraja Senior Member
since 2002-06-22
Posts 812The Netherlands |
I simply love this poem... and the title is so inviting!!! Neeraja |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
This is beautiful, Karilea. Hugs to you, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (02-03-2003 07:49 PM).] |
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