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Rainbowdust
Member

since 2002-12-05

Posts 320
Sydney, Australia

0 posted 2002-12-18 07:46 PM

You are my night.
An expansion of beauty;
A canvas on which the most beautiful things can shine.
You are my night.
The promise of you,
Makes the longest day tolerable.
You are my night.
You gently shade out the dirt,
And accentuate the world's delicate beauty.
You are my night.
With you comes the refreshing breeze,
The tranquillity which permeates my soul.

You are my night.
Constant, yet always different
Moving, but always there.
You are my night.
A piece of home I take with me,
No matter how far I roam.
You are my night.
A comforting blanket of anonymity
Should I choose to use it.

You are my knight.
You rode up on a horse the colour of the full moon
Wearing a cloak of dusk studded with stars.
You rescued me from a fate worse than death:
A life without appreciation, a life without love...
A life without you.

You make me feel like a princess,
You turned my life into a fairy tale
You are my knight, my night, my beloved,
Tonight...
And every night.

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2002-12-18 08:53 PM

Rainbowdust - you are a princess, as you write words like one. Very nice write...

BC

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2002-12-18 10:04 PM

nice visions of loves beginning

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2002-12-18 10:56 PM

Enjoyed...James

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2002-12-19 01:57 AM

does he have a brother?

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2002-12-19 02:01 AM

Rainbowdust, I love these words of love you have written. He sounds like a very special guy.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Rainbowdust
Member

since 2002-12-05

Posts 320
Sydney, Australia

6 posted 2002-12-19 02:59 AM

Thank you all for your lovely replies! I actually wrote this a while ago and the inspiration for it and I have parted paths... passing shadow, both he and his brother now have girlfriends, sorry to say.

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-12-19 03:15 AM

(smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, this is soooooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, and may this fairy-tale always come true for you and may you always feel as special as the princess you are! (sigh) This is beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Shireen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

christian
Member

since 2002-12-18

Posts 331

8 posted 2002-12-19 04:06 AM

ba dow. cupid caught me with his arrow.

this is nice, the flow was consistent
and your words trembled into things and
dreams unimaginable. thank you for
inviting me into your world.

***** [*****].

-chris.

Rainbowdust
Member

since 2002-12-05

Posts 320
Sydney, Australia

9 posted 2002-12-19 04:07 AM

5 stars, chris? you've made my day.... and night.

The soul would have no rainbows, had the eyes no tears.

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

10 posted 2002-12-19 04:41 AM

Soft, tender, and well written--may another knight enter your life soon--enjoyed!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

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