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Silvery Pale Seduction
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Silvery Pale Seduction |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
Silvery pale suspended in the sky leads her to the echo where islanders dance inside the glow of a living fire in a crescendo of drums shadows stare mesmerized by the beauty of primitive grace the rhythm, sensual and seductive closes her eyes, circling the body it caresses as it sways the potential exploding showers the night with passion, in a wake of silence, two remain compromised by visions of what if, she wonders is the connection real or a merely a desire to transcend mundane voices whispers don’t be a fool......leave the senses coil rising like a cobra exposing hunger suppressed by taboos etched in jewels Delicate she steps bare feet upon burning coals his eyes are gold the mouth is sweet, moist and pink she sighs immersing into a gaze that teases her flesh with sinewy arms and open palms he extends the invitation Running her tongue over lips that need to be kissed, she hesitates as once again the voices hissssss.......leave Abandoning the shackles of inhibition ~She stays~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
ah... and in this place of tropical dreams.. we see passion as well as reserve. nice imagery in this and certainly one to start the mind searching for the layers perhaps hidden inside... I enjoyed |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
Thank you Cpat Hair, it's fun to create what if's that are more fantasy than real, but isn't that what writing is about, to explore the possibilities and perhaps dream a little.....*S* ~I envy those who have perfected the art of being~ |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
very sensual, suggestive, erotic, but not pornographic, which would be okay by me, anyhow,for what its worth |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
inkedgoddess, thank you, I hoped it wasn't ~too~ much, I wanted it to be fade to black leaving the majority to imagination. *S* |
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ShadowRider Senior Member
since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038USA |
some think the snake is diabolical, but at times, it has a sensuousness the movements, the hiss, the coil... Your poetry wraps around the reader's imagination, like, well...a ...~nudge~ Sorry so late on this...i was watching my Pacers get beat by some Houston team led by the Ming Dynasty....all 7'6" of it.... Love the mood you were in when you wrote this! Jeff |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh my gosh, I love the sensuality in this, sweet friend, I don't even think a mongoose could break this kind of charm! (big hugggssssss) Yay, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is beautifully sensual.......just enough to make the imagination work overtime. Thanks for sharing this, and I'm glad you decided to come back to PIP. I'll be looking for more of your poetry, friend..... "Love makes the world go around" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very nicely done! I love the imagery, the way you seduce the reader into sharing the moment. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that is a good write! I know those shackles myself |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
Shadowrider, too bad your team lost.....as far as the mood, hmmmmm, well sometimes I am little moody *grin* Thank you dear friend~! Mistletoe Angel, thank you what a sweetheart you are for reading and bestoying me with such compliments. I do appreciate them and you very much~! garysgirl, I enjoy reading sensual romantic moments but I think the majority of it can be left to our imagination, we can fill in our own blanks....ya know what I mean? smiling here, you are such a sweetie, thank you for making me feel welcome~! Midnitesun....I like that name, and I do thank you very much for reading and taking the time to comment, your kind words did this body good~! passing shadows, oh yeah I have those shackles also; honestly they come in handy,they keep me out of trouble....hehe, but....it is fun to live a romantic setting vicariously via the written word, every once in a while~! Thank you so much~! (hugz) ~I envy those who have perfected the art of being~ |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
mmmmmm....nice, seductive, ....the end holding a promise for a step into our own imagination. I believe it has the makings for an excellent write. If i were the star counter...i'd give you 5 out 5 ***** and a 2  ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
One more thing....don't be trying to sneak one of your poems by me again. I'll call Mother and you know what will happen then. We will both be in trouble...that's what...Ok forget it , I won't call her. |
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Laney Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 85Illinois |
A little *wink* *wink* *nudge* *nudge* a very passionate, and erotic poem...with someone more underneath the covers! --Alana |
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Laney Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 85Illinois |
let me correct myself...."someTHING more beneath the covers...jeez wheres my mind...lol |
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Barbara Trautman Member
since 2002-10-23
Posts 90 |
I wish, I wish ...... Someday maybe, but I doubt it. That I will ever be able to express myself in such beautiful words linked together as if they were precious jewels. I do appreciate your beautiful talent. Barbara |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
This is just STELLAR... The sort of writing that is always a pleasure to read. Ed |
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