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What Luvz About
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What Luvz About |
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rOxXbabY391 Member
since 2002-12-14
Posts 71 |
Isn't funny how things work out? Now I know what luvz about The tears The cries The hard good bye's Breaking my heart, Wish i would die The luv i thought would last forever How I figured we'd always be together But the luv is gone Cause things went wrong Decisions were made And I moved on But I'm finally happy, after all that pain After walking through all that rain And although alone, I was strong I didn't need all along! So isn't it funny how things work out? NOW i know what luvz about "I don't think I can make it through one more night. 'Cause how do you answer "What's wrong?" ~ when nothing is right. |
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rOxXbabY391 Member
since 2002-12-14
Posts 71 |
Correction!!! "I didn't need "YOU" all along"  ! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Love is not about those things though... those things are about losing love or finding out it was not really love, but a need...to feel completed by someone else or to be validated by someone else..or just a need to connect and the connections not being enough.... enjoyed the poem..and by the way.. if you want to edit something you have posted there is a button at the top of your post that allows you to change the post... |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Oh and we keep on learning more all the time...but learning that you can make it on your own no matter what anyone else teaches you about life is well worth the trip. You did a fine job with this. ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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Laney Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 85Illinois |
Good write--reminds me of a time I once went through! Good Job!  --Alana |
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