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30 Moons Now 30 Days |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533
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This fullness is the Long Nights Moon reflecting from your placid lake and on the tree ornaments strewn spinning stars as branches shake The added light close Saturn brings illuminates the ponderings of we who've long been circling a distant dance of wondering One month hence a Full Wolf Moon will blazon when at last we meet the answers will come swift and soon to questions that our hearts entreat |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
RS... this reads as if a riddle is being asked in some ways..and the reader asked to resolve the time and space it exists in..is asked to look below the words into their meaning... I enjoyed |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Richard Beautiful paint of words and anticipation. |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Aye, like the Captain, I believe this is riddle laden, or not... enjoy the swirling of the imagery, and heard the sounds of the fullest moon in the shift of night with this... thank you. |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
i respect this. thank you for the write. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very interesting write Richard. Much enjoyed..and yes, it does read like a riddle of sorts. Well done! ~Hugs~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
ahhhh, Mr. Wells, a riddle indeed--soon to be solved it seems--enjoyed!! "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
--and in one month hence a Wolf Moon, a Storm Moon shall light up the night sky--to be followed by a Chaste Moon--which isn't nearly as much fun! tehe I'll leave any solving of riddles to the other readers. I simply enjoyed the imagery which to me was magical and the kind of poetry I enjoy reading. ~ warm hugs EA |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I enjoyed very much. Thank you....  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I hope you like the answers that you get. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm not one for riddles, but I like this poem! and I love Saturn even more  |
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