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Professor Gloom
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0 posted 2002-12-18 02:06 PM


Poetic River
Professor Gloom

Listen to the words
Flowing like a spring river,
Gliding over rocks
Cool from far off snowy peeks
Refreshing to the drinker

Gloom

Response to Earth Angel’s poem
We Kindred Spirits




© Copyright 2002 Aszard Drazlom - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2002-12-18 02:11 PM


I am so pleased to see that you posted this little beauty as I had suggested!

It needed to be enjoyed by more people than just those who may have read this lovely tanka reply you had made to my poem.

warm hugs,
EA

Professor Gloom
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2 posted 2002-12-18 02:18 PM


Thank you, Earth Angel
Pleased you enjoyed my words to request the higher posting.

Gloom

christian
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3 posted 2002-12-18 03:08 PM



it's stale think, just words that
paint a picture. no feeling. well ..
i guess thats what poetry is, just,
not my taste. so, wouldnt be
fair to judge it. keep it up.

-chris.

Elan
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State of Wide Eye
4 posted 2002-12-18 03:41 PM



A poetic flowing, indeed.
Thank you, professor...

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2002-12-19 01:29 AM


what a picture!
Zinsser
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Calif.
6 posted 2002-12-21 10:49 AM


A thirst only words can quinch....

~~ Connie ~~

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Gaia
7 posted 2002-12-21 11:06 AM


Enjoyed the taste of this.

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