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my first post in this forum |
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stifler Junior Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 12ontario, canada |
The Real Me A part of me is missing And I know what it is It’s my heart It’s been ripped out And will never be back again I feel this way because I have loved And I have never loved before I will never love again For I don’t like this pain A pain I cannot bare I wish it would all just come to an end All the pain and heart throb Never come back again I want it gone from my emotions So I will not feel I will just block people from seeing me The me, the one that no one knows That’s right The real me stif |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Welcome to PIP a great first post. Heartfelt and honest the other side of love. raph |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Nothing like the pain of a good heart rip, After a few times it becomes more bearable, But it always grows back to be ripped again. Very good first post, full of emotion, Enjoyed this Gloom |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
one can not hide the heart forever...somewhere someday it will be touched again and you will know it still beats, it still feels love, it still needs another... welcome to the forum... |
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stifler Junior Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 12ontario, canada |
ty u 2... i hope the other ppl in PIP enjoy the rest of my poetry aswell. it is about my first love. so it is a true poem not a fictional  |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Welcome to this forum, Stan. This is a very excellent first post here. You wrote with very much feeling and emotion. I hope to read much more of your poetry. That's all I'll say (right now, anyway), because I don't know you well enough to know if this is from personal experiences.  "Love makes the world go around" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Welcome to Passions! A home of kindred spirits who love writing and reading poetry! Perhaps if people got to know the "real" you, true love will find its way to you. ~ Warm welcoming hugs, Earth Angel |
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stifler Junior Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 12ontario, canada |
ty cpat for the welcome. my buddy introduced me to this forum awhile ago but i have just never signed up. but i love poetry. so i was lookin through my favs today and saw PIP so i clicked on it and i was like oh ya i remember. so i signed up today stif |
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stifler Junior Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 12ontario, canada |
yes this is from personal experience, and ty for the welcomes and complements |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Welcome to passions!!!!!!!!! i know your gonna love it here... Adn very good first post.. Thank you so much for sharing, and for choosing passions... You will make many friends. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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stifler Junior Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 12ontario, canada |
ty connel, i hope i make sum friends here. every1 so far is really nice. but newayz time to go to work. have a great day all |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
They say it is better to have loved and lost than to have never of loved before.... Sometimes thats hard to believe, but give it a chance. We love having you hear and look forward to reading some more of your work. ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
it sounds emo, oh no, are you an emo child? god forbid, :smirk: no, actually--i liked it, for some reason it kept me into the read. i think 'cause you can feel emotions oozing int it. not too shabby, not too shabby.. *** and a 1/2. [out of *****] -chris. |
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nosceteipsum Junior Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 11i look for a star to the east, a savior |
suffer the little children to come unto emotion. or maybe the little children suffer from emotion...coming or going. unto you i bestow kudos and my own typing errors. im sure theres one running around somewhere. nice. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Oh Stan, this is such a heartfelt debut, sweet friend, we all send hugs your way, for you have come to the right place as we all share these sentiments in the poetry we write and know you are loved and never alone! (sigh) Welcome to Passions, sweet Stan, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Stan, thank you for sharing!   May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I enjoyed your heartfelt first post. Welcome to Passions. Enjoy your time reading and posting here. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
stifler - the pain subsides with time. It will happen again, remember these words, for it will... Best to you... BC |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
enjoyed your work. Welcome to Passions! I really hope you are here to stay. Never be normal! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
As the song says, How can it work when love hurts...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to the blues board. Enjoyed the write. Never say never. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can relate to this one much...having been through it over and over, I don't think it ever really stops |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
welcome! what an emotional first post. enjoyed. hope to see more of your poems soon. once again, welcome, and thankyou for joining us! lots of love, gemma xxxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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stifler Junior Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 12ontario, canada |
ty all for reading my poem. i have another poem posted now. it's a lil more happier poem. lol. newayz i hope u enjoy. the subject on it is call #2 post. enjoy stif |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome to Passions. The healing takes place post pain...hang in there. Well done. ThisDiamond |
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babes684 Junior Member
since 2002-12-08
Posts 10 |
Hello- I really enjoyed this poem i can relate to it in some ways but yet itz very true  i better go now GR8 WORK n keep writting  Ang |
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winston Member
since 2002-12-19
Posts 204NW of Eden |
Know how you feel man, but don't give up on love, as Forrest Gump said his mama always said that "life is like a box of chocolate, you never know what you gonna get". You never know, there might be destiny working her magic to make another Ontario woman fall for you. Here is the constructive bit. "Bare" is not the right word in the sense that this poem is trying to use it. "Bear" would make it more legible. Hope that helps. Thanks very much for letting me participate in this genuinely emotional poem. "am a tourist not a terrorist, don't shoot, cause we are all on a journey to God" Michak |
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stifler Junior Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 12ontario, canada |
ty once again. u r all very nice . hope u enjoy the rest of my work. if u have ne ideas on wut type of emotional poem u wanna read i have all sorts and they r all from personal experiences. so just say an emotion and i will post one havin to do with it. ty and enjoystif |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Well done first post. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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