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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
I love my life, I just can't admit. I love my family, But we have fights. My life isn't special, But I still do love it. No one knows, My darkest secrets. I can do things, That arnt right, That some people, May say its fake. But one day, I will do it, And keep it safe, And only I shall know. I want to learn, Things that are different. And I know, That people won't like. But I don't care, About what they think, I just keep saying, This is for me. --------------------- If anyone does understand what I meant, Please, I want to see what you think. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
sometimes we have to do things for us... and to explore the ideas we have about what should and shouldn't be in our lives... always with an understanding that some errors are more costly than others if we chose wrong.. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Connel Reaction isn't everything. Sometimes it's not worth the effort. But keep writing. |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
That poem isnt one of my best, per say... But it is a private poem.... just thought that i would let other people read it.. But thanks for actually reading it. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"I love my life"---hold that thought! warm hugs, EA |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Connel - I have a very good feeling that I know about what you write, as you have written about me... BC |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
somethings are meant just for us to know....this is true..keep writing  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh Connel, I think you shine with such wisdom here, sweet friend, we must be in charge of ourselves and follow our conscience and let it be our guide as does Jiminy Cricket in Pinocchio say, and think before we act to avoid cliches of misfortune! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Connel, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Good for you, Connel. Keep writing your heart, for no one knows what is in it better than you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you gotta please yourself... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Connel...write the feelings in your heart...no matter what the feelings are, someone will be touched if it comes from your heart, friend. I'm glad to see you back. "Love makes the world go around" |
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Robert Adamson Member
since 2002-10-21
Posts 328PA/USA |
Hi, Reminds me of a good hearted American Rebellion. Thank you. etoodog |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Connel, I would say to yourself be true except when it goes against the grain of society. Keep writing and keep exploring your emotions. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
private poems, that only we know the true meanings of, are often the ones that can help us get through bad times. they have a profound healing effect. your poem was beautiful in its oozing of personal thoughts, promises and wishes of your own. i enjoyed the insight connel, thankyou, and well done. lots of love, gemma xxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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