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ecrivan
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0 posted 2002-12-18 12:52 PM



Order in the courts to maintain silence
disarray flourished when commotion erupted
the theme was the genetic order of things
a garden pea affected school upbringing.

Students performed as they were told
a human species was kept on hold
followed orders set by a higher company
a tedious order of accounts..a litany

order suggests you know what come next
the chicken or egg.... put to the test
and the pattern of speech had its queue
the evolved meaning has earned its due.

the order in courts required procedure
on inherited traits or somatic features?
principals srang from Mendelian conjecture
genetic alleles corrupted accepted lectures

the pattern of colour, shape and size
unfolded a gene theory he surmized...
today we've mapped the genes of things
selected life traits...influenced beings.



© Copyright 2002 Martin Dansky - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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1 posted 2002-12-18 03:12 PM


ecrivan,
I don't subscribe to genetic theory, I suscribe to the chaos theory but you put your point across well describing the random conjunctions that make up our lives.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



ecrivan
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2 posted 2002-12-18 11:27 PM


very true trying to poke fun at our order of things:

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (12-18-2002 11:29 PM).]

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