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December, Kansas
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December, Kansas |
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Ryan Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 297Kansas |
silly crow celebrating, "spring has come"--does he know tomorrow is still December? lightning hooks across the sky, then it is winter again [This message has been edited by Ryan (12-17-2002 11:23 PM).] |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
yeah...this in a few words sums up this Season in KS...but we have had little lightning... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ryan, you've captured Kansas! Now let it go! Laughing...so much said, in so few words. Magnificent! |
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Connel
since 2002-11-04
Posts 736Florida, USA |
Great poem... Great job, and thank you for sharing.. I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent! Very well done and much enjoyed! ~Hugs~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ryan Enjoyed the read. |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
i liked this too (spent a week driving through Kansas one day...  )but - i have to admit, i can't pin down quite why i do like it. perhaps because the poem, like the lightning strike, is quick and strong? |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
Sounds like home....but I'm in Texas. Very good stuff here. ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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Siofra
since 2000-09-28
Posts 551State of Suspended Passion |
you make an impact with few words. I love this as I have loved a lot of your work. "My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles in delight) Oh Ryan, it is like this in Colorado too during the winter, two years ago we actually had a tornado in December just outside Aurora, and it was big enough to be concerned about, very unusual and rare around here! (smiles) This is delightful, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ryan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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