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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981
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puddles on the ground, scatter my reflection, breaking mirrors, 100 years bad luck Thunder, thunder in the sky, why do you follow me just tell me why my own gray cloud, It follows me, reflects my personality was it the ocean, following behind? subtle shadows, none darker than me. Sometimes it seems as if I have grown roots, all the way around this world, none go inside, all of me so far above the earth, stuck in the sky, I'm cursed. Just to tell you. I am not depressed.  Never be normal! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Wind, you are not cursed! You just have a magnetic personality and are attracting all the elements! Great write! ~ hugs Linda |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Absolutely great poem, that opening stanza blew me away. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great write, kinda sad, and I'm glad you said you aren't depressed, because that's what I would have thought. |
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Sandpiper Senior Member
since 2002-06-15
Posts 738land of flora and fauna |
Sometimes it seems as if I have grown roots, all the way around this world ..powerful!! enjoyed.. "And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul." |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
cursed with talent yes!!! some thought provoking, clever lines here, my favourites; "subtle shadows, none darker than me." and "Sometimes it seems as if I have grown roots, all the way around this world," lots of love gemma xxxxxxxxx learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
The calm of your poetry sits in large contrast to your website personality. The thing about growing up is both of those will level out. I enjoy watching your words grow. Mike |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Wind, I'm going to keep this one. Love that opening puddle reflection. Outstanding imagery and metaphor. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Wind~ This is quite a powerful piece and very well written. You have so much talent and I always enjoy your work.  Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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