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rOxXbabY391
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0 posted 2002-12-17 05:24 PM


You know what?
I'll be okay
Come on girl
Just one more day
You WILL be fine
just wait and see
There IS a better plan for me
Day by day
Class by class
It will end soon
IT will end fast
The pain will slowly melt away
Like snowmen on a sunny day
So keep your head up
It's okay
Just make it through
One more day

"I don't think I can make it through one more night. 'Cause how do you answer "What's wrong?" ~ when nothing is right.

© Copyright 2002 Emily Calandrelli - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-17 05:27 PM


I really enjoyed the read, thank you for sharing

Andrew

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2 posted 2002-12-18 04:08 AM


I've heard this said to me, and it was wrong. Good stuff though.
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3 posted 2002-12-18 09:21 AM


just one more day

just one more hour....

sometimes life gets down to that..

nicely done

Connel
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4 posted 2002-12-18 09:26 AM


I = Enjoyed. Thank you -TO- You.. lol... Good poem. Thanks for sharing.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

Connel
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5 posted 2002-12-18 09:27 AM


And welcome to passions do to the fact i was away when you came here.. lol... Its a little late, but still.. Welcome.

I wish to become a great poet some day, but it will only come in time. Til then, I shall write my poems, and wait.

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6 posted 2002-12-18 09:56 AM


This is really great,
Keep going


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