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Wobbly Head Bob
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0 posted 2002-12-17 05:15 PM



Feel the nature of beast upon your brow
Break the cycle of what you will allow
Boundaries cast in mud and myst must show
Lies within dispenced with what you know
Like love before the curse is rot
Fever rains more oft than not
Taught your mind recoil, spin
To move from without within
Forever brings the edges near

A light
In the hallway
Casts a shadow
But I am not scared
For this
Life is not
Always unkind

Feel what you can
Enjoy while you do

And the piano plays.

© Copyright 2002 Wobbly Head Bob - All Rights Reserved
vlraynes
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1 posted 2002-12-17 05:23 PM



Bob~
I really like this...very much.
Love the overall 'feel' that you've created with your words.
VERY nicely done.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Sunnyone
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2 posted 2002-12-17 05:27 PM


'feel while you can, enjoy while you do' and from this piano player, just keep that music going!! Really enjoyed this write, and the tune it echos in the air!  ~~S~~

Pen how you truly feel...
it is a safety-valve for the soul!
    


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3 posted 2002-12-17 05:30 PM


Thank you for sharing this with us, I really enjoyed the read

Andrew

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4 posted 2002-12-17 06:54 PM




(sigh) Oh Bob, this is sooooooo wonderfully heartfelt, sweet friend, you recite quite a symphony here, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bob, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-12-18 03:58 AM


good write, well done! I love pianos!
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