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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 12-17-2002 05:14 PM       View Profile for inkedgoddess   Email inkedgoddess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for inkedgoddess


feeling kind of vague,
washed out,
like the sky emptied,
after a nightfull of rain,
feeling drained and blank,
like the eternal white
consuming this page,
in wordless funk and speechless doom,
and right now its just feeling kind of good,
not light, not dark,
not up or down,
no deluge of demons,
or unicorns dancing out of clouds,
no rainbow illusions,
nor wrist slitting anxst,
just kind of there,
embedded in the timeless sands,
beneath the ocean's flow,
endless
as its reflection
on its soulmate sky,
not pressed for time,
or hurried decisions,
just lost in the waves
echoing the clouds flight
rolling by

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (12-17-2002 09:58 PM).]

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Sunnyone
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1 posted 12-17-2002 05:18 PM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone

Oh, my friend, you captured how 'vague' really feels!!!!!!!  Excellent and Bravo from this poetess who hits the vague realm on a regular basis, as I find it quite relaxing! Enjoyed very very much!

Pen how you truly feel...
it is a safety-valve for the soul!
    

Aenimal
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since 11-18-2002
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the ass-end of space


2 posted 12-17-2002 06:32 PM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

I think alot of us are sleepwalking in this same mindframe but none of had the right words to describe it until now. Leave to inked thanks.

raph

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Sandpiper
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3 posted 12-17-2002 07:22 PM       View Profile for Sandpiper   Email Sandpiper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sandpiper

sometimes, to just "be" is a special place--enjoyed!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

Bill Charles
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4 posted 12-17-2002 07:24 PM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

inkedgoddess - just there being vague, you describe it well...

BC
wranx
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5 posted 12-17-2002 09:10 PM       View Profile for wranx   Email wranx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wranx

Nothing vague about the feelings here though.
Or the way you portray them

Cool write!
Ed
Earth Angel
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6 posted 12-17-2002 10:08 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Not down time, not up time, just the in between time!

~ I was just floating lazily by on my cloud and thought I'd drop by to pay my respects, but I cannot find the words, but that's okay. There's always manana............tehe

EA
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7 posted 12-18-2002 01:59 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

yeah, I can relate, I feel that way too...blah
muted
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8 posted 03-16-2004 09:50 AM       View Profile for muted   Email muted   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for muted

good to know i have company
vague is a good place to hide at times
 
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