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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2002-12-17 05:14 PM

feeling kind of vague,
washed out,
like the sky emptied,
after a nightfull of rain,
feeling drained and blank,
like the eternal white
consuming this page,
in wordless funk and speechless doom,
and right now its just feeling kind of good,
not light, not dark,
not up or down,
no deluge of demons,
or unicorns dancing out of clouds,
no rainbow illusions,
nor wrist slitting anxst,
just kind of there,
embedded in the timeless sands,
beneath the ocean's flow,
endless
as its reflection
on its soulmate sky,
not pressed for time,
or hurried decisions,
just lost in the waves
echoing the clouds flight
rolling by

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (12-17-2002 09:58 PM).]

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2002-12-17 05:18 PM

Oh, my friend, you captured how 'vague' really feels!!!!!!! Excellent and Bravo from this poetess who hits the vague realm on a regular basis, as I find it quite relaxing! Enjoyed very very much!

Pen how you truly feel...
it is a safety-valve for the soul!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2002-12-17 06:32 PM

I think alot of us are sleepwalking in this same mindframe but none of had the right words to describe it until now. Leave to inked thanks.

raph

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (12-17-2002 06:33 PM).]

Sandpiper
Senior Member

since 2002-06-15

Posts 738
land of flora and fauna

3 posted 2002-12-17 07:22 PM

sometimes, to just "be" is a special place--enjoyed!

"And it was at that age...Poetry arrived in search of me...And something started in my soul."
Pablo Neruda

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2002-12-17 07:24 PM

inkedgoddess - just there being vague, you describe it well...

BC

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

5 posted 2002-12-17 09:10 PM

Nothing vague about the feelings here though.
Or the way you portray them

Cool write!
Ed

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2002-12-17 10:08 PM

Not down time, not up time, just the in between time!

~ I was just floating lazily by on my cloud and thought I'd drop by to pay my respects, but I cannot find the words, but that's okay. There's always manana............tehe

EA

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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