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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
A little bit to light the way home I guess I did it just to say some When I wonder where my day gone Never was, but gotta move on Looking back now what can I say Never learned to do things your way Followed you and day went by day Found myself and have to make way Guess it never mattered right then Couldn’t find my space to ride in Hold my hand and be my best friend What it was it can’t be again But you know no cirlce’s broken Everlast these thoughts unspoken When you wake up and you’re wokin Always two soul circles holdin |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Bob! Welcome home! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I love this! Excellent! I don't believe we've met... and welcome home! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) This is so lovely, sweet friend, I love it, and know you have soul and it always shines with love, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bob, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Wobbly Head Bob Member
since 2000-05-15
Posts 299Virginia, USA |
Thanks, all for your kind replies...Been gone a while I hope to be uploading stuff more regularly! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I like the ease of this, the ending is great! I can sure relate to what you've written here. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Beautifully penned, Bob. Great to see you posting again.  Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Salty Senior Member
since 2002-11-23
Posts 669Texas |
enjoyed this write of friendship & trading spaces. ~Salty In the Midst of movement and chaos, keep stillness inside of you. |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
the first three stanzas dont meet up to the last stanzas calibur. if it werent for those last four lines, i wouldve have liked the poem for it was a bit too cliche for me. but, great last verse. ahem, yep. |
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