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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2002-12-17 04:38 PM

I shouldn't,
Still,
I might.
If i didn't,
Who would i be deceiving more?
You or I?
Don't want to give in,
This plan,
Where i reassure,
Myself.
Bury shallow,
Occupy the thoughts,
For a short while,
'Til conciousness arrives.
Tired,
Of imagining,
Sick to the bones,
Of waiting.

learning each day, for you and i, our paths have met, i've already learnt that you are love.

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2002-12-17 04:44 PM

and it's the waiting that is the hardest of all. I enjoyed this, as it molds itself to each individual's situation, and that is what makes it special!! Great write, and I see you are fairly new and we haven't met, so let me say that I look forward to seeing more from you!! ~~S~~

Pen how you truly feel...
it is a safety-valve for the soul!

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2002-12-17 04:52 PM

(sigh) Oh Gemma, this is touching, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you as I understand this waiting all so well and it can be so difficult! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Gemma, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2002-12-17 09:30 PM

Great work in conveying the mood in this. Really enjoy this

raph

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

4 posted 2002-12-17 09:55 PM

you describe it so well, gemma. I love your poetry

Never be normal!

regards2you
Member Elite

since 2002-10-01

Posts 3940
California

5 posted 2002-12-17 10:51 PM

Gemma,

Very interesting write. Caused me to re-read and think. Enjoyed.

warm regards, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
"Desiderata"

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2002-12-18 01:36 AM

sick to the bones...

neat way to say it

Laney
Member

since 2002-12-18

Posts 85
Illinois

7 posted 2002-12-18 03:27 AM

"Patience is a virtue" Awesome poem...your emotional fustrations are dripping off the page! Great write!!

--Alana

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

8 posted 2002-12-19 04:21 PM

gemjop~
I enjoyed reading this.
Waiting is never an easy thing.
You've expressed it well.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

9 posted 2002-12-19 04:38 PM

Ello chickie....nicely done....keep a stiff uppah lip and have patience...like me....okay, I 'ave no patience, but I try?....It's like making "toad in the hole" and waiting for it to get done don't ya know.

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

10 posted 2002-12-19 07:16 PM

Well done...I think the presentation, Gemma..

believe in what your heart feels...

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

11 posted 2002-12-19 07:19 PM

Gemma, this is very pretty. I like it.

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

12 posted 2002-12-19 07:28 PM

gemjop - many thoughts here in your writing...

BC

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