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0 posted 2002-12-17 03:48 PM


Spring Comes

white plum
trees swaying wild
foxtrot, samba, rumba
white dress, no music, just the wind
dance me


~*~


red bud
holding tightly
flowers colored purple
how did purple become such red
beauty


~*~


peach trees
soft fragrant pink
blossoms unfolding now
soon sweet fruit bearing down to pick
pick me


~*~


unfold
not just flowers
blossoming all around
come forth, smell spring’s fragrance, just...here
spring comes


© Copyright 2002 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-17 03:49 PM


(chuckling) you are just torturing me aren't you...knowing how I hate the cold..and winter...



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2 posted 2002-12-17 03:58 PM



More poetic trees, please. Thanks, sweet Sunshine, you've added a sweet fragrance to my day.

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3 posted 2002-12-17 04:53 PM


It's just around the corner, and the English roses will be out by the millions!! Ah, I love Spring, and this write gave all of us some much needed 'sunshine'!!!!

Pen how you truly feel...
it is a safety-valve for the soul!
    


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4 posted 2002-12-17 05:01 PM


Thanks, Karilea, for the Spring trees and blossoms. I love Spring. Oh, and thanks for the "Sunshine", too.  

  
(BTW........We've had lots of sunshine here in sunny Florida today. And, it's been kind of hot today, too........Okay, I'll hush and quit rubbing it in. I'd still like to see some snow before Christmas, though.....)

"Love makes the world go around"
~~with love and hugs from Ethel~~  
                  

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5 posted 2002-12-17 05:05 PM


Ooh these are such beautiful images, I can't wait for the warmth and glow of the spring, the bare trees and cold can be rather depressing if they are around for too long. Thank you for sharing these with us

Andrew

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6 posted 2002-12-17 06:29 PM


Oh so beautiful Karilea..
Such an enjoyable warm read
after being out in the freezing cold
hunting down a Christmas tree all afternoon.
~Hugs~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

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7 posted 2002-12-17 07:37 PM



Karilea~
These are some of the most gorgeous trees I've ever seen.
You've painted them perfectly.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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8 posted 2002-12-18 10:42 AM


Lovely!
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9 posted 2002-12-18 10:55 AM


lovely my friend
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