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0 posted 2002-12-17 01:31 PM


Moonlit Lullaby

in the stillness
of the night
I wake
I am stirred
by the sound
your breathing makes
in simple things
great things
are revealed
a tender moment
of belonging
is how I feel
in moon lit light
your breath is mine
in reply
I fall asleep
gently listening to
your sleeping lullaby


“life is not about breathing moments, it is about moments that leave you breathless.” author unknown

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-12-17 01:37 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, and may the symphony of sweet love forever lulla-bye you to sleep! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-12-17 01:39 PM


Very very tender thoughts here Helen.
Much enjoyed.
~Hugs~

~ Season's Greetings to my 'family' at Passions ~

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3 posted 2002-12-17 04:39 PM


the most soothing sound in the world is the gentle breath of your loved one as they sleep there next to you.........this is so lovely, and I enjoyed it very much.....~~S~~

Pen how you truly feel...
it is a safety-valve for the soul!
    


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4 posted 2002-12-17 05:02 PM


This is so beautiful thank you for sharing this with us

Andrew

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